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"...no"
A quiet whisper at all the other whispers
Putting up with the little things
Continuing to walk despite the blisters

"..no"
A barely audible spear
Barely scratching any surface
Crying out to steal a tear

"no"
Flat and plain rejection
Brushing away the unwanted
Feeling the spread of the infection


"No!"
Fending off with a swipe of the arm
Pushing back
Resisting surrenders charm


"NO!"
A heart freezing scream
Shredding vocal cords and smashing ears
Roars that rip one from their own dream

Collapse?
Let it win?
Know what this enemy is?
Even remember how it started?
Understand this fight?

Are these states of mind unique to me?
Should i get so worked up over it all?
Does it any of it matter?
Are we alone in these struggles?
©2009 ~solidus01
:iconsolidus01:

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Answer could be no, it could be yes, what came to mind at the time.

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nice. is it supposed to be some times when the word no can b used?(i bet u 10 buck the answer is "no"=p)
speaking of words...have u heard that the bird is the word?

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The word shall spread like wildfire,
Hear u gotta new messiah
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Actually yes, i have heard the birdi s the word. I think its more about defiance of things in general, but take what meaning from it you can.

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"People beleive what the media tells them to beleive, and i tell the media what to beleive." - Kane
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wow i can see this visualised in my head, good work.

are we alone in these struggles?

no =D

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~ love is a chemical reaction that causes delusions ~

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